Translate 'As Time Flies'

March 3, 2015

Betrayal


Footsteps…
Form disappears,
Fragrance lingers with soul;
Upsurge and surrender to fate
Move on.


An attempt with the Cinquain (pattern 2-4-6-8-2) for the March poetry slam at yeah write.

9 comments

  1. Thought provoking!

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    1. Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by Prajakta.

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  2. I love this line: "Fragrance lingers with soul."

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    1. Thanks Jennifer. Hope the poem too made some impact!
      :)

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  3. I second Jennifer's comment; the line "Fragrance lingers with soul" almost makes the phantasm human. A beautiful piece.

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    1. Sorry for the late reply dear.Glad that you liked it.
      Thank You!

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    2. Sorry for the late reply dear.Glad that you liked it.
      Thank You!

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