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March 18, 2015

Moving On

Space to grow has shrunk
We have split into
 You and me.

Though, we may share
The same roof
Still, in our hearts,
We stay aloof.

Sounds can no longer
Hide the silence
So I move on…

12 comments

  1. Silence is usually a good indicator. I liked the flow of this piece!

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    1. Silence speaks louder than actions; it is just that we pretend to be ignorant of such signs. It is a pleasure to have your opinion. Thanks for stopping by. :)

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  2. It is definitely time to move on, no matter how much it hurts, when there isn't anything more to say.

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    1. So true; maybe hope keeps the loose stings attached!

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  3. That first stanza - oof. Really nice job.

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    1. Welcome Christine and thank you. Your 'oof' made me blush. Glad that you liked it.

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  4. Oooh, this is telling. Silence sometimes speaks and sometimes what it says isn't always what we want to hear!

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    1. Thanks for liking it C.C.
      You nailed it right ! Hope plays the culprit here I guess.

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  5. "Sounds can no longer/Hide the silence"
    Wonderfully telling lines, heartbreaking.

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    1. Thanks, Jennifer. So glad that you liked it!

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