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March 30, 2015

When She Found Herself

While walking through the forest she revisited the path her life had treaded. Life had been straight out of a happy movie until she lost him.

Death did not do them apart for she had lost him to another woman half their age leaving her with self-complexes and doubts.

As she walked aimlessly, she saw bright light shimmering through the canopy as if a divine signal welcoming her through the entrance of a new life.

She felt a sudden change and entrusted upon herself the new ‘she’ promising to pick up the pieces of life and coming out flourishing.

Lillie McFerrin Writes
word prompt: ENTRANCE


  1. Very interesting twist. Magical and promising. Nicely done!

    1. Thank You for liking the post and for the sweet words.

  2. A beautiful tale of hope.

    1. Thank you for stopping by and appreciating the effort.

  3. The idea is interesting. The writing is messy and needs a revision. A lot of the words could be removed to create a clearer message. If you wanted more detailed thoughts regarding the work's structure, I'd be happy to help. Just let me know.

    1. That is so thoughtful of you to lend your help. Maybe the thoughts dis not come on paper as they should have . Will definitely keep your words in mind and reach out for help. Cheers!


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