July 13, 2015

Bent With Humility

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  1. Anonymous13:09

    Very good to see you at Carpe Diem :)
    Embracing the traveler - very nice

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    1. Thank you for the warm welcome and for liking the post.

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  2. My grandparents had a weeping willow tree in their back yard, and I always loved it.

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    1. Hope someday you will share a picture of that tree for us, Linda. Looking forward to it!

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  3. There's a lot of good in this haiku - would recommend breaking free of 5 7 5 syllables to make it even better. is a bit too formulaistic, and authentic haiku are not hampered by syllables. But like I said, the imagery is there...

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    1. I will certainly keep your advice in mind. This is my initial attempt so am not aware of the variations so... Thanks for the kind words...

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  4. What a gorgeous haiku. Welcome at CDHK.

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    1. Your appreciation is motivating. Thank you.

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