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February 8, 2016

Eternal

photo by Caroline Knopf
This week the letter is 'E' and I dabble in the Fiction. Open to critiques!

While she stood by the waters, the silence echoed the story of her life.

After five years of companionship that faced the turbulences of life to triumph over the enemy and the soul, he ditched her for death.

The dove-eyed lass with a feeble body took over the reigns of the sea and the cause of the people – his people and now her children.

The longing for him never left her but the love he had bestowed upon her during that short spell proved deeper than the sea.

His body had left her 25 years ago but the soul he left behind for her – his eternal love.

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13 comments

  1. "ditched her for death" I like very much. Pretty much final.

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  2. A good story for this prompt. Thanks.
    =)

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  3. a sad story .... eternal love is what it says, eternal... so sad we all have to leave our eternal love at one point or another... isn't it?

    have a nice abc-day / - week
    ♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)

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  4. Sadly haunting. Beautifully written.

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  5. Goodness! I can relate to this. Well done.

    Leslie
    abcw team

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  6. A touching story well told in few lines. Happy ABCW!

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  7. Beautiful and very touchy.

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  8. This is moving and touches my heart. Loved ones stay for ever with us.My husband died more than 16 years ago, but it feels as if it was yesterday.
    Have a great week.
    Wil, ABCW Team

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  9. deeper than the sea


    ROG, ABCW

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  10. oh, I liked this very much. I think you have the talent.

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  11. oh, I liked this very much. I think you have the talent.

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