July 12, 2018

Truth and Dare

"She was an ugly duckling in all senses so the relationship strained", so her 'ex' claimed. The bait was perfect for such a gathering but the timing went wrong.

Thank you Denise


She had entered the hall as a breath of fresh air,  bright eyes struck like the lightning, while her charm warmed each gaze. He was busy laying the trap ignorant that she stood behind him.

Then he heard her voice and the heat of his lies made him flicker for his dirty soul lay bare as she coldly questioned, " would you care to explain?"

16 comments

  1. LOL! He fell into his own trap, lies and all.

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    1. well, lies don't last long...

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  2. Nothing like a good comeuppance! Good six, love the "dirty soul" line.

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    1. Appreciation motivates... glad this piece found one.

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  3. Alright! So much for thinking he could outsmart this woman. Glad she put him on the spot :D
    Good Six!

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    1. The biggest mistake on the part of humans is their ignorance about the fact that future is always waiting to give a toss... can be positive or negative.

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  4. ..If only!
    lol
    all too rare, enjoyable to imagine (or experience) nevertheless.
    Good Six!

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    1. That is the fun of fiction it gives you the freedom to have a satisfying if not a happy ending.

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  5. Every man who is planning to cheat figures out a way to blame her. Good that it backfired!

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    1. yaah! actually no one wishes to bear the burden of guilt so they find themselves safe behind the walls of lies...

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  6. Busted! Good one.

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    1. Thank you! glad you liked it.

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  7. You story makes me wonder if it has actual experience behind it. LOL

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    1. Now you make me smile. Is it that good? ;)
      I am happy this side of the road :) Touch wood!

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  8. Well, he sounds like an ass, and I am happy that he was the one who ended up being trapped.

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    1. Glad that you like the conclusion...if only life was so easy too for the poor souls...

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Hey! Do not leave just like that...